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Rebuilding...Commence

by ~Runeshai

It's raining.
Surprise, surprise.
I'm acutely unaware
        of a hand to hold,
        another body's warmth.
Everything I see
        reminds me of her:
        the flower I wish I'd given,
        the grass I want to pad her happy footsteps,
        the forest bench and ocean air I wish I could share
                with her.
But somehow I'm reminded of you.
Yonder bench is overgrown,
        bright pink flowers wrapping their coils
                'round its faded seat,
        perhaps reminders of its happy memories,
                a guarded relic,
preserved,
protected,
        and here I sit enclosed
                trees protect and hide me while I watch,
                        a solemn predator
                        after lonely prey.
Life goes on:
        tiny flies scurry in the breeze,
        grasses wave and dance,
        leaves whisper their endless tunes.
Still... I'm reminded somehow of you.
But I don't miss you...
        I miss what I gave you...
        wish I could give it again...
        or just have it...
        or see it...
Oh, rebuilding...commence!
It's raining.
I must walk home.
Maybe I'll be cleansed.
:iconruneshai:
Written on a rain-sprinkled walk down by the water.

EDIT: Arrrggh... the lines:

';preserved,
protected,'

should be indented equal to the line above them ('a guarded relic';). I tried multiple times to no avail so just ... imagine they're placed correctly. BTW it's the thought processes of each sentence that determined the indentation levels.
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